In his narrative "First Pen" it states "What words were hidden-unborn, unwritten- in all that unused ink?"(Fletcher, 2005, p.44)The conclusion sentences in "First Pen" is to make the reader think of unknown words that could lie everywhere in the world and in your mind.
In is narrative "Bobby" it sates "Not a day goes by that I don't miss him."(Fletcher, 2005, p.60)He makes the reader feel sorry for his loss and the reader would be upset of the hearing of a death of some one elses mistake.In these writing samples Ralph Fletcher shows different writing techniques in his narrative.
I like the detail you put in your writing and you put some of the phrases of what they wrote or said. You also put the page number so you can let the reader know where to find the phrases. But, you do have one spelling mistake and that's the only error you have. Overall, your writing is very detailed and well written.
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