Someone i loved very uch was my uncle George he was the best. But my brother Sam was not so sad when he passed because when he was little my Uncle George hit him because he was being mean to my grandma. The night i heard that my Uncle was in acoma i was very nurves and my mom hurd it from my Uncle Sal she was devisted and was woundering how she could break it to my grandma because that was her baby brother and the only one left of there family. When we arived at the funeral every one was very sad. And when we got to close to the ending of the wake my grandma went up to her babys brothers cascate she prayed for him and cried and i was right by her side while she was sad and i also started to cry as i typed this.
This is in loving Memory of my Uncle George, George DeMorato
I liked the way you discribed what happened to your uncle and it sounds very sad. Your discription is more complex in a good way. Althouth you do have some spelling mistakes and some words with missing letters, the rest of the story is lovely in a sad way. I am sorry for your loss.
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