Thursday, April 28, 2011

Speculitive writing

Every day of the year Sam and Ashley's parents work very hard, and didn't come home till late that night.

"Mom and dad's anniversary is coming up in two days," Ashley tells her little brother Sam. "We should try to make them an anniversary dinner here."

"I agree we should because they do work very hard and and they do so much for us every single day." Sam announces proudly.

"If we are going to plan this then it has o be something totally amazing that their going to be so excited and so proud of us."Ashley points ou to her brother."We can set the table with the table cloth, plates, cups, forks, spoons, and careful with the knifes, and also we are going to need napkins, and we are also going to need to get food for them somehow before they get home."

Sam thought that was a great idea. "We can get them food from the chinese place doen the block, we have he number on the fridge."Sam shows Ashley.

"Thats great but how are we going to pay for there food, all I have is 10 dollors from doing my chores."Ashley sighs.

"I also have 10 dollors" Sam points out to Ashley.

"Perfect know we have food."Ashley announces. "Now tomorrow we need to set the table with the table cloth, cups, plates , forks, spoons, knifes and be very careul with them, and lastly napkins."

"We can also clean so that the house looks nice when they come in" Sam suggested to Ashley.

"We can do this" Ashley tells her brother Sam proudly.

The very next day Sam and Ashley rushed home to get every thing set up for their parents anniversary dinner like the table with the table cloth, plates, cups, napkins, forks ,knifes, and spoons, and order the food.

"Sam can you go order the food while I set up table for dinner?" Ashley asked Sam.

"Sure, and I will get what mom and dad always get."Sam told Ashley.

After Sam had ordered the food and Ashley had set the table for the anniversary dinner,  they were waiting for the food to arrive. After thirty minutes they were still waiting for the food.

"It is getting way to close to eight o' clock." Ashley said worryful.

"Why don't we ask Josh our neighbor, hes a great cook and he will not charge us because we have known him for years and he loves to help us with differnt things like showing us how to cook, and build things." Sam explains to Ashley.

"Your right!"Ashley exclaimed to Sam.

Josh lived right next door to the left of Sam and Ashley, so they walked over and rang the door bell.

"Hey, what are you guys doing here?" Josh questioned Ashley and Sam.

"Well we were hoping that you could help us with something for our parents for there anniversary?"Ashley asked Josh.

"Well sure, what is it?"Josh quesioned Ashley.

"We were hoping that you could help us cook dinner for our parents to have a nice anniversary dinner?"Ashley asked once more.

"Well sure, lets go cook that dinner you were talking about."Josh says gladly.

After they head back to Ashley and Sams house to cook their parents anniversary dinner they ask Josh what they could cook for this dinner.

Josh suggested that we make either "Ham, and veges or turky and veges?"

We decided that we should have ham and vetables because their mom and dad loved ham and not so much for turkey. After cooking there dinner Ashley and Sam set the food up on there parents plates. After wards Ashley and Sam hugged and thanked Josh for what he had done for them.

"Thank you so much," as Ashley and sam were hugging him tight.

"Your welcome, and no problum at all, just ask anytime and I will be there." Josh told the two of them.

After Josh left they were waiting for there parents to walk threw the door and be surprised. The door started to open and they sarted to get excited. The door opened and they yelled...


SURPRISE!!!!!

To there mom and dad a showed them what they have prepare for them to eat. At the end of the night there parents were so pround of them they wanted them to do it again.



 

1 comment:

  1. Nice blog post Ashley. You did a great job on dialogue and explaining it in great detail. Also I liked your central idea. Oerall you did a great job.

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